This is a response to blog post #3 by Chelsea May
This is a very well written post!
Right off the bat, I was impressed by how well you integrated tables and images into your post. Inserting images can be difficult because there are infinite images online to choose from, but choosing one that is both relevant and impactful is always a challenge (or at least it is for me). I usually insert one at the beginning of a paragraph, but the way you incorporated them between the paragraphs to support and emphasize your argument is well done. The tables also does excellent job showcasing ways to deepen your PLNs. I particularly like how you created specific actions you can take for each hypothetical goal.
With that said, I worry that people may be confused with inclusion and diversity being in separate paragraph. I wonder if you could combine those together, and state the distinction between the two clearly to better explain what they are and the relation between them.
Overall this is a great post with plenty of information!
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